Crazy-Train's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario's Revenge: SE]

Found a few errors.

Grammatical mainly. im should be I'm or I am. That sort of error. That just shows lack of initiative. You really should have someone take a look at your flash before you post.

Anti-Clock. Who cares. Besides it pulls away from the Mario world. Example, Mario vs. Bowser at the beginning, why the strawberry. I just felt that if he went "superpower" it would have been a better choice to make a giga-Bowser (Super Smash Brothers Melee) to fight.

Dragon Ball Z is over used. Super Saiyan Mario was over the top. Maybe a much larger (bulky maybe) Mario would have been better. He could have become bigger by a mushroom. That would also bring the feel of the Mario games back to focus.

Besides these errors it was alright. Not my top ten list but wasn't a complete waste of time.

3/5
Good luck on your future flash productions.

[Autumn Tree]

powerfull.....

....just powerfull. Thank you for this beautifull flash. I am glad you did some research before you started. (the small things like the poster, points for that) I was truly moved by your flash. It showed (me atleast) that these were everyday kids. That they were not 100% evil like the media let them to be. That they were angry and they viewed that this was the only way to fix things. Thank you again.
5/5

[B/W Cartoon About Berries]

YES I love this.....

....man how much shit do you have to be on to make this insane stuff up. YOu totally rock. Man I love these kind of flashes. Keep up the great work Mr. Firth

[Wall Lunch]

wow humpty dumpty on crack

that is all i can say

[SW: Attack of the Text]

oh my god Im crying that so funny

that was truly great. once you pass voting im putting this in my favorites. that was great. I never even thought about that before truly original to. Im still laughing.
5/5

[Dervian The little Devil]

at first i was like "This is going to be blammed"

Then when he changed I was all "F*CKING YEH MAN!!!" this was great. I wanna see a series of this. little satan dog goes nuts and kills all MUAHAHAhahaha.

good job

[Pogostickin' Turtle]

and this is your first?!?! Good stuff bro

see I gave you a 5/5 not because this flash is the worlds greatiest but because you put forth some effort. You cut the music, you didn't draw stick figures and said "its my first so plz 5 this because its my first." also what impressed me was that you finished the song at the end of the flash instead of letting it play till it was finished. Real class. I also love the simplisity of it. Its story line is basic but its style takes it a long ways. Also this being your first and all helps. The only thing I would have to say this lacked was a "Replay" or "Watch Again" button at the end. and some credits. Keep submitting this good stuff. I cant wait to see more of your work.

To all of the ng ers who want to make and submit there first flash, this is a good example to try something instead of sticks that are tweaned.

5/5