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...it doesn't sound to scary. sry. well i still like your Tasty Love better. but you are getting better. when you make another song try changing the sound volume on each sound. it sounds like its all the same level. it would sound kewl but its all blarring at once, destroying some of the effect it could have. also try panning some sounds to the left and right speeker. that way only some sounds come out of one speeker but not the other. its simple to do and it really gives it a new better fell to it. if you want something scary, try a deeper voice. I can say it helped me in one of my songs. and i think it would sound good in this one. but if you want that light voice effect i suggest a horror movie girl scream sound. they easily give goosbumps when you hear the shreek. well good luck on your next submission. you starting to get better. =) 3/5