Crazy-Train's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Funk'D]

not bad

i found you in your thread and wow. not really into fuck but this was pretty good bud. 4/5 keep playing funky music boy

DwightMcCallum responds:

Haha, your purposeful misspelling made me laugh! Thanks for the positive review, man. That's the way I felt about my song before I read jarrydn's downer of a review.. lol

[You're not HONESTY]

well.....

...it doesn't sound to scary. sry. well i still like your Tasty Love better. but you are getting better. when you make another song try changing the sound volume on each sound. it sounds like its all the same level. it would sound kewl but its all blarring at once, destroying some of the effect it could have. also try panning some sounds to the left and right speeker. that way only some sounds come out of one speeker but not the other. its simple to do and it really gives it a new better fell to it. if you want something scary, try a deeper voice. I can say it helped me in one of my songs. and i think it would sound good in this one. but if you want that light voice effect i suggest a horror movie girl scream sound. they easily give goosbumps when you hear the shreek. well good luck on your next submission. you starting to get better. =) 3/5

daiwoguo responds:

Ok, I'll be glad to take your advice next time!Thank you!

[Tasty Love]

now thats more like it

i could listen to this for some time. This one is by far one of your best submissions. I do have to agree with LtDonny about the repetitive. though after listening and reviewing your other stuff this is pretty good. you should take some time. lazyness is fun but lets say you worked on it for like 2 weeks to get it perfect. then you would have a masterpiece. this deserves atleast a 4/5 good job. btw i will be downloading this one to listen to later. good job

daiwoguo responds:

I just work on it for 3 hours, because I use the Demo version of Fl studio which does't allow you to save your production, so everytime I make I'd do it in one time.

[dance robot beat]

well.....

....I cant say this is bad. because it isn't. but it is kinda well boring. like i said when reviewing your sbc song you should add some more sounds. make this a loop then make a song with this idea. It would sound really good. good luck on your next submission

lildevil47 responds:

umm im gonna make something like this again watch for it

[sbc is the king of the portal]

sbc is ok

at least thats what I hear. sounds just like hyper MAX. try adding more sounds to make it more liked by the ear.

lildevil47 responds:

thnk i might make somthing like this wit the sbc thing thanks

[hyper MAX]

huh

this loop isn't that great. you should try using more synths. you can easily tell this is a fruityloops. good luck next time

lildevil47 responds:

thanks dude this was one of my first subbmissions

[all your base r u belong to us]

hmmmm....

...ive think I hear this beat once before....oh well. nice beat, you use fruityloops. easy to tell. the all your base thing got annoying. take it out and leave the nice trance in. gj

lildevil47 responds:

thaks and yes i used fruty loops it was hard to make thaks again